Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

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onnimelon2
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Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

Post by onnimelon2 »

Hi class. I chose Annie Atkins as the graphic designer to spot focus. Here's two design roughs. Thank you!
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Design Version 1 Home pages desktop & Mobile
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HOMEPG-mobile-digital-roughs-design01.jpg
Design Version 1 Gallery pages desktop & Mobile
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GALLERY-mobile-digital-roughs-design01.jpg
Design Version 2 Home pages desktop & Mobile
HOMEPG-desktop-digital-roughs-design02.jpg
HOMEPG-mobile-digital-roughs-design02.jpg
Design Version 2 Gallery pages desktop & Mobile
GALLERY-desktop-digital-roughs-design02.jpg
GALLERY-mobile-digital-roughs-design02.jpg
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drkittenpagas
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

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Hi Alexandra,
I love Annie Atkins too! I think your second design ties so nicely to what she does as an artist. I hope you keep working with that idea its so creative!
Kirsten Pargas

ChloieKonrad
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

Post by ChloieKonrad »

Hello Alexandra,

I really like the style of design two!
I would suggest adding a background color to the home page that is like the one on the gallery page. The white seems very bright against the ticket, and I think takes away from it a little bit.

Good Job! :)
𝓒𝓱𝓵𝓸𝓲𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓷𝓻𝓪𝓭

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Emily-Hudson
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

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Hi, Alexandra

I really like your ticket/yellow layout, it looks very visually pleasing.

The top of your mobile design is a bit cluttered, I think adding a separate navigation tab would assist in that issue.

If you go with the pink layout, I'd try to change the pink so that it isn't clashing too hard with the blue. Their values are too similar and it is a bit hard to look at.

Great work, looking forward to more!
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Olivia_haltom
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

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Hello! I love the direction your design is going for the yellow layout. It's very bright and eye catching. Overall, your roughs are really well done!
Olivia Haltom

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hazzie.jpg
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

Post by hazzie.jpg »

Hi Alexandra,
I love your ticket concept. It’s super creative and really represents the designer. I’m wondering if you could make the gallery pages look more cohesive with the homepage design of the ticket. I’m thinking that perhaps you could make the buttons look like tickets or even just make the home button look like a ticket. I think that it’s just missing that one little linking piece that brings together the homepages with the other pages. Other than that, I think you’re doing a great job! Super creative, and I’m excited for the end product.
˙˚∘⊹Hazzie Castaneda⊹∘˚˙

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