project3 prelim

[Aub]

Yeah this is super late and Im missing a bunch of stuff like other options but here you go

[hazzie.jpg]

Hi Aubrey,
The Reno Balloon Race is on of my favorite local events that I attend religiously every year! I like your very clean design layout and I think that it’s going to turn out really well. I have two suggestions. The first one being that I think you should use more consistent fonts within your layout and the second suggestion being that I would make sure that all of your images are large enough so they don’t get pixelated on larger displays. Great job, I’m looking forward to seeing your final project!

[PAmes]

Aubrey!

Fellow balloon racer (real)

I love your color choices they're very fun on the eyes and just generally pretty! Excited to see where you take this!

[goggei]

Hi Aubrey,
I'm glad someone is doing the Reno balloon races; it's a fun event! Your layouts are clean, and I love the prominent image of the air balloons on the home page. The placement of your heading is also perfect in the image. If you could add a touch of color in the other pages to match(like more hot air balloons but with a lower opacity), I think it would help keep it consistent compared to your homepage. Overall, great work, and I'm excited to see the final product!

[onnimelon2]

Hello Aubrey!
Even though it's late at least you have something! I agree with the other comments that I do like your color choices. I absolutely love that banner text with the balloon image you've chosen. I don't really see that font anywhere else, I love how balloon-like and retro it looks. I highly recommend using that font for your head titles! Making that headline text for your paragraphs bigger would also make your design even stronger.

[genevieve_dierenga]

Hey Aubrey,

I really like your design for the balloon race website it is much better than the one they use right now. I really like your use of pictures. I really think that you could probably use them in more ways. I really like the one where you made it a background maybe do more like that. I also really like your color chouses for it. one thing I do recommend maybe use one more interesting type face to make different parts pop more, like your menu. Love your work great job!

[Instructor]

Aubrey, I like the composition you have, it has nice balance and motion. It would be great to see the mobile versions. Your photos are spot on!