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Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Fri Oct 11, 2024 10:14 pm
by onnimelon2
Here's the rough digitals for project 2. The first set I was going for the "cool tech" look and the second is a fake "tech humanist" look for my fake giant tech corporation.

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2024 10:56 am
by Melissa_Sanchez
I have to say I am preferring your "tech humanist" designs they look really cool and futuristic! If you go with that set of designs I would recommend changing one thing about your WHY US page. For your desktop version I think it would be good to put your white text in the Black rectangle with the WHY US headline. Like how you have it in the mobile version! I think it would be easier to read that way.

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2024 2:37 pm
by genevieve_dierenga
Hey Alexandra,
I really like all of the pictures you used for your layouts! I think I like the second on better the colors are a bit more cohesive and eye catching. on thing I recommend it think about readability for the parageaphs sometime I find it hard to read some of the text. I am looking forward to see what your final will look like!

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Thu Oct 17, 2024 1:34 pm
by drkittenpagas
Hi Alexandra,
I like the tagline of your first design, its hilarious and witty. But I like your imagery of your sixth design. I think you'll figure out a cool way to create your website whichever way you choose.

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 6:48 pm
by hazzie.jpg
Hi Alexandra,
Very cool concept. I love the imagery and layout of your second concept, but I’m not too sure what you’re selling. At first glance, I just know it’s some sort of tech, but since it’s such a broad term that I’m left a little confused. Other than that, I think that your concept and layouts are solid. It’s looking great.

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 8:58 pm
by goggei
Hi Alexandra,
I love both options, but that tech humanist vibe calls to me so much. The colors are vibrant, and dark enough for the white tech to be legible. I think a cool idea you could do would incorporate your logo of the three stripes as the hamburger menu to keep it consistent with branding throughout the pages. Overall, loving how it looks, and excited to see it live :)

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 9:25 pm
by ngrunwald
Hi Alexandra,
All of your design look really well put together, out of all of them though I really like your bottom design the most. The images your used for backgrounds and just embedded throughout those layouts look really cool. I also liked how you used a lot of black so the other colors that are involved really make those layouts pop. All of your design have great navigation nothing is hard to find. Great job