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by Instructor
Wed Nov 20, 2024 7:42 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 Final Late
Replies: 1
Views: 44

Re: Project 02 Final Late

Cedar, your preliminary work is excellent. I would have liked to see 12 catalog pages rather than 6. Also do you think it would look better to rid the red border around About Our Company, and to reduce the opacity of that box? The photos are perfect and I like the tag line.
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:11 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 5
Views: 78

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Olivia, I love your event. Can you bring it to my house? I prefer your first design yet I am not sure the background roundeth box shapes are necessary. And of course I know you would not have your text over lap those boxes should you decide to keep them. I know it is Christmas, yet the 2nd design I ...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 5
Views: 83

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

LaTara, What a remarkable logo! Thank you for putting up such great preliminary. I like both ideas but prefer the first idea because I enjoy the warm community it feels like. And this is a great way of disucssing the importance of people caring for each other, which is one significant meaning of thi...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:07 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 6
Views: 102

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Nancy, I like your thudding name of Bolt and Bass. I would drop the text down a bit from the mansion, and the opacity of that text box is perfect. I am imagining you will have some unbliebable bolts of lightening between the rods. It is difficult for me to differentiate between the two ideas. You ha...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:07 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project03 Prelim
Replies: 7
Views: 101

Re: Project03 Prelim

Emily, I thought I was going to have IPA beer, but then when I realized what it is, I think your company name beats my heart. You may have missed uploading your 2nd design. I think the galaxy heading is perfect for intergalctic percussions. You may want to drop the opacity even more for the backgrou...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:06 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 03 Prelim
Replies: 8
Views: 107

Re: Project 03 Prelim

Kevin, The image of 3 dogs running at eye level is pawsitively capturing, I hope you use it! and if you do, put the text somewhere else such as the solid sky, with different color lettering, not under the dog mouth. In fact in all your designs, you need to move the letters off of colliding with the ...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:05 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 3 prelim (late)
Replies: 7
Views: 91

Re: project 3 prelim (late)

Mars, I like the first design, and if you go with that, even though cursive lends a classy touch, more and more people cannot read cursive, so perhaps you may need to consider audience and go with 2nd font. I really like your thumbnails you posted.The old green really works for me. I know you will b...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:05 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 03 Preliminary
Replies: 5
Views: 91

Re: Project 03 Preliminary

Hazzie, I like the brighter design 1, and the design 2 background colors and images are too muddled for my liking. Born in Boston, I say Yay on this marathon. Maybe you could get a Nike sponsor, that's where all the money is in Web Design, right?
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 6
Views: 88

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Cedar, I love the action skiing! I am not a fan of the crown atop the mountain. The C in the logo looks like an L.. I don't think I would put the logo in front of items, but on the clear solid sky it seems okay. I really like the gold design and if you do that, the text ontop of the gold sunset coul...
by Instructor
Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:02 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project03_prelim
Replies: 5
Views: 85

Re: project03_prelim

Lee I like your Hang Gang name. I would definitely use images.Of course I know you will keep your text inside of the boxes. Also, be sure elements are not bumping into other elements. A nice start!