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by Siri
Thu Mar 26, 2015 12:09 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project two
Replies: 12
Views: 8786

Re: project two

I like how this is turning out, though I'd advise that the margins between the products be more evenly distributed, the unevenness does begin to distract the customer after a bit. The elements of the top right seem pretty cramped as well, don't be afraid to play around with scale and giving each one...
by Siri
Thu Mar 26, 2015 12:06 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: P2 - Roughs - JJ
Replies: 8
Views: 7036

Re: P2 - Roughs - JJ

Hey Jonathan, Second mockup product page with the inner page from the first mockup, boom and you're golden. The products page of the second mock-up feels more unique than the first mock-up, which looks a bit too much like a standard products page for the wonderful design you have going. I'd suggest ...
by Siri
Thu Mar 26, 2015 12:01 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project #2_Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 8603

Re: Project #2_Roughs

Holy wow Danielle, these are all gorgeous! I'm liking the layout of them so far, they're wonderfully organized and contrast well against the background of your design, though if these are going to be subpages of your catalog then I'd really like to see the main page, which I don't have any doubt you...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 11:52 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2- Roughs -Elizabeth Mejia
Replies: 12
Views: 8725

Re: Project 2- Roughs -Elizabeth Mejia

Hi Elizabeth, Both these concepts are pretty good so far, and I agree that the first concept can do just as well, if not more strongly without the white boxes surrounding the products. Compared to the rest of your layout, the white really sticks out, and not in an entirely good way (maybe if you dec...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 11:49 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: PROJECT 2 Roughs DCC
Replies: 13
Views: 9210

Re: PROJECT 2 Roughs DCC

Hi Dalanie, Of these two, I'm favoring the second one. The colors of the background image in the first concept is making it just a little too busy, while I'm liking the differing color borders of the second one. It adds a nice and subtle twist to the design, much like the products you're advertising...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 11:46 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project two roughs ..!
Replies: 9
Views: 6425

Re: project two roughs ..!

Hey Ashley, I'm also enjoying the little icons indicating elements, they add a nice touch and I think they further emphasize information rather than just spewing out a block of text. I think it would do well to bring in just a touch of informative text, however, even if it's just a one-sentence desc...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 12:17 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 rough shopping cart
Replies: 7
Views: 5010

Re: Project 2 rough shopping cart

The whole site continues to be beautiful, I like how right away you're informing the client as they're browsing the packages rather than having to click on each individual package, giving the impression that they really are working with a professional. While I do like your typography choices, what I...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 12:14 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: My products page
Replies: 12
Views: 9185

Re: My products page

This is definitely one way to get customers to start tinkering with the site when they visit, and I think the addition of a subtotal and shopping cart option from the get-go would be a good idea. How many times have we all shopped online only to be startled by the total amount once we were checking ...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 12:08 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2_rough
Replies: 12
Views: 8515

Re: Project 2_rough

These are gorgeous Kiwako, very clean and easy to understand at just a glance. It might just be my personal preference, but I like the first concept the best because it provides an in-depth view of the product. The second layout is also great, but as others have pointed out it needs just a bit more ...
by Siri
Wed Mar 25, 2015 12:04 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project Two Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 9129

Re: Project Two Roughs

Hi Paula, It may be because the green buttons match the color palettes of your photos, but I'm really liking the second concept. Those buttons echo the logo in a sense, and they're clearly visible against what is otherwise a dark background where elements can easily get lost and blend in. If you can...