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by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: pr1 2roughs-AB
Replies: 13
Views: 8652

Re: pr1 2roughs-AB

Thank you everyone for great suggestions and comments!
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 roughs DCC
Replies: 15
Views: 9860

Re: Project 1 roughs DCC

The rought one to me works much better, even though they look very alike. the color of backround and some light colored images work nicely, i get the havenly feel, I am sorry to say but that logo have to go. It doesnt look it belong there, the rainbow inside black circle and bacl type on top, give u...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project1
Replies: 19
Views: 17676

Re: Project1

I would like a coffee right now I am so tiered..lol..Anyways, I do like your roughs 1 over the rought 2, they are lot more unique and interesting to look at. To me things look pretty good, I might of change the image of your second page ( the one behind the word-do u wanna be coffe)- it looks very b...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one critique
Replies: 19
Views: 12596

Re: project one critique

I love your logo! It looks amazing!! Also the idea is pretty cool. I like both layouts, but like you said they have compliantly different feel to them, I think it be up to your if you want it more serious or playfull. As of now the red one works better, at the first glace at home page I was able to ...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:43 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project #1 Roughs
Replies: 20
Views: 14204

Re: Project #1 Roughs

I like both of the home pages you made, but I have to go with the second one (black and white). I like the composition and pictures have emotions, unlike the first rough. I would definitely change the fond of the name on your home page, maybe make it smaller , bolder and straight. As of now its hard...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - Ashleigh Porterfield
Replies: 19
Views: 12668

Re: Project One - Ashleigh Porterfield

I very like the simplisity and fun colors. So far I like the version A better, the colors and overall compositon works much better. On your home page the navigation bar that looks like a blue ribbon, I would loose the ribbon and made it bigger, as well as I would of pulled the colors of your logo in...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Lingling's project 1 roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 11937

Re: Lingling's project 1 roughs

i very liked the L and art around it in your logo, but it has to be much bigger, it was very hard to see it. Also, I am not big fan of the background, its very distracting from the page, or if you will keep it, then the color of your white page that would dominate your background, and not the other ...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:17 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Rough Ideas Project 1
Replies: 15
Views: 10126

Re: Rough Ideas Project 1

First of all your pictures are beautiful, i want home like that! I am guessing that in Tahoe. Anyways, when it comes to the logo and company name, I might reconsider changing the name from "full exposure photagraphy" to " real estate photagraphy." or full exposure, the real estat...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: P1 Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 13509

Re: P1 Critique

I am not sure witch one is your home page, or they are both home page with a slite veriation? If thats so, I like your top designe where you have your navigation buttons at the top. I migh stretch the bar across, or move it a little bet down. If one of them is home page and the other one is not, I w...
by oasib
Thu Feb 26, 2015 11:51 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary for Project One
Replies: 21
Views: 13655

Re: Preliminary for Project One

I like your idea with the script, but the overall layout and color work better on your blue version. I am not sure what your logo, but looks like it is the type with blue bottle. I might reconsider changing your logo. maybe use a face of witch in a black head, or having a bottle with type on it, lik...