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- Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: pr1 2roughs-AB
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8652
Re: pr1 2roughs-AB
Thank you everyone for great suggestions and comments!
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:30 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 roughs DCC
- Replies: 15
- Views: 9860
Re: Project 1 roughs DCC
The rought one to me works much better, even though they look very alike. the color of backround and some light colored images work nicely, i get the havenly feel, I am sorry to say but that logo have to go. It doesnt look it belong there, the rainbow inside black circle and bacl type on top, give u...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:07 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project1
- Replies: 19
- Views: 17676
Re: Project1
I would like a coffee right now I am so tiered..lol..Anyways, I do like your roughs 1 over the rought 2, they are lot more unique and interesting to look at. To me things look pretty good, I might of change the image of your second page ( the one behind the word-do u wanna be coffe)- it looks very b...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project one critique
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12596
Re: project one critique
I love your logo! It looks amazing!! Also the idea is pretty cool. I like both layouts, but like you said they have compliantly different feel to them, I think it be up to your if you want it more serious or playfull. As of now the red one works better, at the first glace at home page I was able to ...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:43 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project #1 Roughs
- Replies: 20
- Views: 14204
Re: Project #1 Roughs
I like both of the home pages you made, but I have to go with the second one (black and white). I like the composition and pictures have emotions, unlike the first rough. I would definitely change the fond of the name on your home page, maybe make it smaller , bolder and straight. As of now its hard...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One - Ashleigh Porterfield
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12668
Re: Project One - Ashleigh Porterfield
I very like the simplisity and fun colors. So far I like the version A better, the colors and overall compositon works much better. On your home page the navigation bar that looks like a blue ribbon, I would loose the ribbon and made it bigger, as well as I would of pulled the colors of your logo in...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Lingling's project 1 roughs
- Replies: 18
- Views: 11937
Re: Lingling's project 1 roughs
i very liked the L and art around it in your logo, but it has to be much bigger, it was very hard to see it. Also, I am not big fan of the background, its very distracting from the page, or if you will keep it, then the color of your white page that would dominate your background, and not the other ...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:17 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Rough Ideas Project 1
- Replies: 15
- Views: 10126
Re: Rough Ideas Project 1
First of all your pictures are beautiful, i want home like that! I am guessing that in Tahoe. Anyways, when it comes to the logo and company name, I might reconsider changing the name from "full exposure photagraphy" to " real estate photagraphy." or full exposure, the real estat...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:02 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: P1 Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 13509
Re: P1 Critique
I am not sure witch one is your home page, or they are both home page with a slite veriation? If thats so, I like your top designe where you have your navigation buttons at the top. I migh stretch the bar across, or move it a little bet down. If one of them is home page and the other one is not, I w...
- Thu Feb 26, 2015 11:51 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary for Project One
- Replies: 21
- Views: 13655
Re: Preliminary for Project One
I like your idea with the script, but the overall layout and color work better on your blue version. I am not sure what your logo, but looks like it is the type with blue bottle. I might reconsider changing your logo. maybe use a face of witch in a black head, or having a bottle with type on it, lik...