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by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 11:45 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 03 Preliminary
Replies: 2
Views: 47

Project 03 Preliminary

For Project 03 I am choosing to base the project on the Boston Marathon. I want to create a Nike-like campaign that revolves around the word “Grit.” The main purpose for this website is to inspire and motivate people to get signed up, so I aimed to create an almost cinematic layout for the website. ...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:30 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project 2!! Yaay me
Replies: 7
Views: 95

Re: project 2!! Yaay me

Hi Kirsten, I really love the purple drop shadow you added to your titles; it makes everything pop out really nicely. Also, love the addition of a pro tip of the week. I think it creates an inviting atmosphere and creates an incentive for the audience to keep visiting your site. It’s very clever, an...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:29 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 124

Re: Project 02 Final

Hi Nancy, I think we are all so impressed by your amazing animated carousel! The way you've incorporated the flavors as ingredients is fantastic! It not only makes it easy for viewers to identify each flavor, but it also adds a visually appealing element to the design. One suggestion I have is to ma...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:28 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 final GO BUY SOME GUITARS!!
Replies: 8
Views: 95

Re: Project 02 final GO BUY SOME GUITARS!!

Hi Ashton, You did an amazing job with your branding. You ensured that everything remained cohesive across your pages really well. I’m on my desktop computer and everything looks and works perfectly, but of course a more responsive design would have been optimal for other devices. Everything is very...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:25 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project02_Final
Replies: 10
Views: 97

Re: Project02_Final

Hi Melissa, Your landing page is absolutely beautiful! I love your color scheme and the overall feel of your brand. It’s impressive how you implemented a shopping cart that updates when items are added. I really wanted to do that too but couldn’t figure it out. The only thing that I suggest is to ad...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:25 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project 2 man
Replies: 9
Views: 74

Re: project 2 man

Hi Mars, Your illustrations and design are stunning! I really love your logo and that hand drawn feel that your website has. The texture on your can labels was a wonderful touch. My only suggestion would be to center the contact container and increase its width to better fill the page. Overall, you ...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 15, 2024 4:24 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project02 final
Replies: 9
Views: 74

Re: project02 final

Hi Aubrey, I think you did a really nice job with the design and layout. The design looks clean and professional. Stuff breaks and I understand just how frustrating that can be, but I can see what you’ve envisioned and the brand you created is very solid. Once you’re able to resolve the issues that ...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Nov 08, 2024 5:01 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 105

Project 02 Final

Hi! I followed the advice that you guys gave me on the preliminary critiques, and I think that it turned out even better than what I had initially envisioned. I'm happy with how it turned out. Given how many pages we had to create, I think I'll be more careful about my naming conventions next time. ...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Oct 18, 2024 9:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01_Final
Replies: 6
Views: 240

Re: Project01_Final

Hi Melissa, I love your contact page! I think that a lot of us struggled with a contact page that was both cohesive and representative of the artist of our choice, but you really did Hayao Miyakazi justice even in your contact page. The only thing I have to say is that a lot of your important imager...
by hazzie.jpg
Fri Oct 18, 2024 9:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Final
Replies: 7
Views: 193

Re: Project01 Final

Hi Olivia, Beautiful website! Everything looks really nice and it’s really easy to navigate. You did a very solid job on your color scheme and your overall design. The responsiveness is good, but I think that if you want it to look more like your prelim roughs you can make it so your desktop version...