P2 - Roughs - JJ

[JonathonJ]

Boy am I late....

I went with my current design for my website, what is live right now, to make my product pages.

I made the product page, and an inner page for the product.

[Instructor]

Of your two posted designs, I think I like the first one better. It nicely continues and updates your branding. The larger images and content area better serve to highlight and inform the audience about the product. Also, the similar product listings will help the user research and might just make you more money.

Watch your margins on the bottom though. Those product listings are awfully tight with your footer.

Good work!

[Sierragirlnv]

I love how you created the "CAW CAW", "TWEET" and "CHIRPCHIRP" lines! I like the top design better. Is it going to function like a rollover button where the pricing and information come up when you mouse over, then link it to another page where the product is featured? I like the idea of "up selling" other products or similar ones at the bottom like that it is an easy way for consumers to see products that they might never have seen or get them to buy more. Great concept!

[Siri]

Hey Jonathan,

Second mockup product page with the inner page from the first mockup, boom and you're golden. The products page of the second mock-up feels more unique than the first mock-up, which looks a bit too much like a standard products page for the wonderful design you have going. I'd suggest doing away with some of the white space for that one, since it almost seems like it wants to float off as it is. Maybe try different color backgrounds that match your palette?

Which brings me to the inner page of the first mockup. If you use this together with the products page of the first mockup and go with the suggestion of a colored background for the product images, it'd match perfectly with this inner page. I can't think of much else to improve the inner page, it's great and seems ready to go now as it is. I look forward to the end product!

[recordd]

Hi Jonathan! Nice job on your roughs! I think all of the designs display your product well but I think I'm leaning more towards Mockup #1 Products and Inner Page designs because I think that the other products page does not display your products as good as mockup #1. I like the idea that you have to add the hover red information boxes, nice touch! I would suggest to add a quantity input box to each product.

[georgia_novotny]

Hi Jonathon,
Both your designs look professional
Both have a clean office type feel/look which goes great with the product.
Maybe try to give the layouts a little more room to breath on the products page.
The #1 rough for the individual product...
I like better because its larger photo to showcase the photo better.

Great job,
Georgia

[ashleighporterfield]

I definitely like your first design better. I like how the layout feels and how bold the text is w/the product name. It is very clean and balanced overall. Your typography is also great! Very clean and really fits the product well. Great job!

[lingling_chen]

Hi, Jonathan
I agree with Michael, your top design1 works better, I like your similar product idea. but As a customer, I like your page_2_inner more, because you have more photos to show the product, Great job !

[Kiwakooo]

Wow I really like first rough.
The color and font choice is great.
Also, the layout is very clean, so it's easy to find information.

I think you can put more space between the price and footer.

Other than that, I really like it!
Good job!

Kiwako