Project 2 Final! -Elizabeth Mejia

[elizabeth_mejia]

Here is my Project 2 Final Yeeeees!!!! http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_20 ... index.html
I think I may have gone slightly insane with this project I felt my sanity slipping and I might be too far gone hahah. Just kidding maybe.. lol. As far as I can see everything works on my computer and it is all linked to my shopping cart so whooohoo!

[kamilyon]

I like your design and the continuity of it. The only thing I would have suggested is to use a font other than the Harry Potter font. There are tons of fonts that would have worked for your site. But other than that you did a good job.

[georgia_novotny]

Hi Elizabeth,
I really like your fun website concept.
I like the font, I think it goes well with the theme even though...
Yes you could choose from thousands of them.
that one is very recognizable and works very with the design.

I would work with the body text to be more organized and have room to breathe.
Like in the potions section where the text seems to overlap.
The form is also pretty small and can be enlarged by half etc.

Good job!
Georgia

[recordd]

Hi Elizabeth!! Yaaaay! You got it all finished! Great Job! Your site looks professional, organized, easy to navigate through, and it is eye catching...the new background fits perfect and also makes the scroll pop off the page (it looks like it is hanging on the wall). Nice choice! Your catalog pages turned out awesome! I love how the potions are displayed because it looks like they are kind of floating there and they are detailed with information about them so I know what they do. Your spells page turned out good , as well. I like how the images of the your spell books fit perfectly with the name and description. I have a couple suggestions for you, one I noticed that your title says potions catalog instead of spells on the spells page and I would add some top margin to your buttons so they aren't so squished under the image. Other than that, looks good!

[Instructor]

Now these are some nice improvements over the Project One versions of this thing!

I really like that stone wall. It helps establish atmosphere and I like websites with atmosphere. For all of it's fun conceits, it's a really well laid out site withing the scroll. The navigation is large, high contrast, and easy to use. That little, subtle drop shadow on the navigation really serves well to set it off. Great detail work. The products are well laid out and you obviously had fun tracking down images and writing some descriptions. Very nice.

Just a couple of issues as I see it. One, it could use a bit of graphical shadow at the top and bottom scroll to add depth. Two, move up your footer type so it's at the middle of the bottom roll. Three, add a little color and logo to your cart to better blend it with the design. Four, the contact form doesn't really work.

Just awesome! Keep up this sort of work.

[lingling_chen]

Good job,Elizabeth. You fixed the drop down menu problem you showed me in the classroom. This is an uneasy project, right?. But we have it done,yeah! I like your idea of your products, I like your contact page, nice colors and images of your products. One thing I think you need to fix is the truth potion image on the potions catalog page. You need to make it smaller to fit the space, because it is too big and covering the button of the top product. Other than that, great work!

[aslychsm]

Wow! This turned out great! I'm so glad you decided to change that background. Your website instantly feels more spooky and authentic. I really do love it. All of you imagery is perfect for the theme, and everything seems to be working fine. I don't have any issues with anything! Great job!

[paulab]

Hi Elizabeth!

The site looks good! It's a little slow loading but once it's there, it's awesome! I love the images that you're using and the descriptions are cool too. I think the scroll could use some shadow work. Otherwise, good job!

[TsukiMizuDCC]

Elizabeth,

I love this site. Really stand out. I love that you change the background to have that Diagon alley feel to it. Great work.

[mccuske2]

you have some potions that cover over other potions. your shopping cart is a lot of white and needs a logo