Project two Final

Post links to your Project Two websites and preliminary work for discussion and feedback.
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kamilyon
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Project two Final

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georgia_novotny
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Re: Project two Final

Post by georgia_novotny »

Hi Kami,
I like the background you used with the overall look of the site.
Its simple yet effective and goes good with the fonts you picked for the logo.
I like the look of the menu and sounds delicious!
The "our story" page is really cool I like the moving info boxes over the rotating photos.

I would fix the navigation on the products page to be on the top like the other pages if thats possible.
To keep it continuos and it doesn't look like it needs to be changed for any reason.
I would also work with the shopping cart descriptions.
When you place an order it only tells you the color, you don't know what your ordering etc.
I would add a title to the pages so you know what pages your on, maybe thats just me :)

Good job,
Georgia

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This design has one of my favorite aesthetics of any design I've seen while teaching.

The blue background gives it such a nice rural flavor. Makes me want to messily eat a plate full of pork ribs on a standing table made from a converted barrel. Typographically, it works extremely well complimenting everything in it. The distressed paper as a content container works so very well. It's even pretty easy to navigate the whole site. I think the home page is probably the best part. It really catches your eye and draws you in.

Just a few issues here. One, center your bottom text links. Two, widen the space between your main menu items at the top. Three, the animation on your contact page clashes with your otherwise awesome aesthetic. Four, I would have put the scrolly box inside the distressed paper on your products page, rather than the other way around.

Such an awesome aesthetic. I really like the look and feel of this thing.
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lingling_chen
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Re: Project two Final

Post by lingling_chen »

Hi, Kami,
Your blue background image works so well with your logo. I really like your contact page, great job on color and layout: ).

aslychsm
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Re: Project two Final

Post by aslychsm »

This came out great! Looks exactly like your originals, and all the links work nicely. It's easy to navigate and read, I love all the textures from the wood, and overall it just feels comforting. I definitely get a restaurant-vibe from it, which is what you were trying to achieve I think. My only suggestion is about your navigation bar. It feels like each time I click on a new page, that navigation bar suddenly moves somewhere else. I don't know if this was your intention, but I think it would be more successful if it stayed in one spot. Good job!
a s h l e y c h i s a m

paulab
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Re: Project two Final

Post by paulab »

Really nice site Kami! I love the homey feel that I get from it. The only thing I see that needs changing is the word "Calendar". It's misspelled on a couple of pages.
Paula Burris
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elizabeth_mejia
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Re: Project two Final

Post by elizabeth_mejia »

I love the textures and colors you have throughout the page looks really nice! I like the logo on the first page so nice and large. I would love to see more products for the store.
Elizabeth Mejia

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TsukiMizuDCC
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Re: Project two Final

Post by TsukiMizuDCC »

Kami,

Have to say that you did a great job. I love the shop and it looks really professional. Great job.
Dalanie "TsukiMizu" Chester
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mccuske2
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Re: Project two Final

Post by mccuske2 »

your products are on the a page brake and your check out cart doesn't have your logo and needs color

Kiwakooo
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Re: Project two Final

Post by Kiwakooo »

This is very cool design!
I like the blue wood background you used. Also, logo is awesome!
It's very clean design and looks professional.

I would put more space between navigation buttons.
Also, in your shop page, I would put "background-size: cover;" instead of "background-repeat: repeat;

Other than that, I really like it!
Good job!

Kiwako

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