Project One - Ashleigh Porterfield

[georgia_novotny]

Hi Ashleigh,
I like both your designs and love your concept of Karma bug!
I like the one with grass a little more because of the organic feel.
I love the cartoon feel of the first one.

I would change the color of the body copy it is a little faded for the yellow background.
Maybe darken that color just a bit to make the text more readable.
Good job,
Georgia

[mccuske2]

I like the first one the best. the colors look great. the second: once you put in the dirt it give it a grown up feel and more of a garden feel.

[recordd]

Hi Ashleigh! Great job on both of your roughs and what a cute business idea that you came up with (I love it!). I'm leaning more towards rough #1. I think the layout and color scheme goes well together and I like the bright a cheery logo on the homepage it just adds character to the page. One thing that I would suggest is to add a little more to you secondary page...I mean maybe add some content above the images that kind of introduces the user to your product...other than that great job and i can't to see your final design!

[d3ft0n3s23]

I like your color schemes on both, very playful and youthful for a revenge concept.

The vector graphics are put together well on the bottle/jars. You could apply the same style of artistry throughout the site in places that need a little more imagery.

Good Job!

[TsukiMizuDCC]

Miss Ashleigh,

Awesome designs and I love the concept. I'm leaning to the first design more because of the color scheme and the feeling of peace (even though you are selling karma.) My main concern on the second rough is the background of the dirt is a little distracting and the color of the logo doesn't fit. But all in all, love the designs. Can't wait to see the finished product.

[c.j.jackson775]

The colors are great in both but I think I like the one with the yellow bee more. I'm really liking the way you have your products illustrated and the layout.

[Kiwakooo]

I like your version A rough.
The color schemes and illustrations are great.
I also like the fonts you used.

Good job!

Kiwako

[ravennvrmre]

I love the idea you've got, its so funny and the bug is so cute. I think either one could work but I like the top one the cartoon background works well with the bug and gives it a very whimsical feeling.

[stalksyouatnight]

Am I the only one not digging the dirt? The first design looks better, the cartoon style works well, when you try to combine it with realism I think it actually takes away more than it adds.

[ravens.way]

Nice designs. Your karma bug is really cute. I like the color scheme in both designs but version one is my preferred site and works better with your bug. Your fonts and layout are easy to see and read.