Project 2 Roughs

Post links to your Project Two websites and preliminary work for discussion and feedback.
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kaycee_weddell
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Project 2 Roughs

Post by kaycee_weddell »

Here are my two roughs for project 2. Let me know what you think!
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dzync88
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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by dzync88 »

I like the first layout with the product name centered over the image and info. Colors and fonts are working great, as with your previous roughs. I like the Add to Cart button from the second layout with the black backgound, though, and would use that in your first layout.
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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by rmiyashiro »

I agree with Cindy. The symmetry of the first layout goes well with the centered company name. The grey 'Add to Cart' button adds a nice contrast making it easier to see.
Ryan 'Danger' Miyashiro

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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by dnorwood »

The others also chose what I would have...I am going to go with them. Both layouts are similar, but the product name being spaced across the top with the lines flowing to the sides (instead of underlined) looks much better. The darker grey 'Add to Cart' button is more noticeable. It's not dark enough to detract from the product, but is enough to catch a persons eye and make them think about using it.
Denise Norwood

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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by NevadaCowgirl »

I like the first rough for project 2. It flows nicely.
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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by Instructor »

Ooooh. Very nice.

I like the first one better I think. It feels much more balanced with the centered title and mirror symmetry. It, like the rest of your site, is easy to navigate and use. I especially like the identically sized image and order form. They balance each other so well. It also uses margin very well. Very little seems to far away or two crowded together. Typographically, it's quite good as well. I like the repeating use of title text as well.

One area where the margin is a little iffy is your top navigation buttons. I think they could use a little more space between them. Right now they look like a long word.

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Re: Project 2 Roughs

Post by killcomicsans »

I dig these a lot! I think your first one is better only cause I like how symmetrical it is and i think the way you've separated the elements on the page with text looks really nice. Overall really professional looking so far. Nice job.
Nikki Hillman

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