Project One- Roughs

Post links to your Project One websites and preliminary work for discussion and feedback.
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chaytothet
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Re: Project One- Roughs

Post by chaytothet »

Ah! I love the colors! I really like the first concept, it's more visually interesting. I love the type choice.

kieley_smith
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Re: Project One- Roughs

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Gosh, I LOVE those pastel colors. Your designs are always so clean and pleasant, they both look great! However, if I had to pick, and I do, I really like the home page of rough two, with the content page layout of rough 1. The only thing I'd suggest thinking about changing is putting some kind of separation line between the title and images of your rough 1 sales page, as it feels a little bottom-heavy at the moment. Good luck! :)
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Breezy
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Re: Project One- Roughs

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Hi,
I like the flow of your second layout, I do have a really hard time seeing your type on the color you used for you layout. Great job overall!
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