Project 1 - Prelim. Critique

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Megosweet
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Project 1 - Prelim. Critique

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Hello ya'll. I chose Samantha Brown, because she is a world renowned traveler. She has been a host to many travel shows and won awards. Traveling is a big thing for me, and I hope that I can see many new places and cultures around the world.
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Christopher B
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Re: Project 1 - Prelim. Critique

Post by Christopher B »

Hi Megosweet,
I really like the burgundy color in your 2nd version - it combines well with the yellow text. My suggestion is to resize your picture of Samantha Brown in the cell phone version - it looks like it's getting stretched vertically a little.

Thanks and have a great day!
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Christopher Bargman
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