Project 1 roughs :)

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drkittenpagas
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Project 1 roughs :)

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Hi all, these are my ideas! Any and all input is always awesome!
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Kirsten Pargas

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Kirsten, Thank you for taking the lead for our first rough posting for the semester. My comments will come after your classmates have done the same. Also, Thank you for being sure created your signature.
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mars_sink
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Hi Kirsten!

I like your concepts for Dr.Suess; they are interesting and creative! I really like what you did with the Dr.Suess art for the home page, but some of your pages feel a little empty. I think adding some site navigation points could make the design of your site more interesting and compelling. I am very excited to see what else you can add!
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Hi, Kirsten

I like the colors and fonts you used for the layouts! They are fun and are a good start to showing the exciting world of Dr. Seuss.

These are a good start, but I hope you take advantage of how wacky Dr. Seuess' world is. I'd love to see lots more colors, shapes, and use of his illustrations in your layouts.

Excited to see more!
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Hello! I loved the teal vibe on the layouts. I think you're going in a really great direction, but would love to see more attention to detail on the typestyles that will be used. Overall a really great start!
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Hello! I think your web design. I think your web design is unique and creative. And I think your chosen colors go well with the web design. However, I think it would be nice to to add a little more pictures to your gallery. And I am sorry to you. I don't know this secret seuss very well. I think it would be good to add a description of this secret seuss. I look forward to your next work!

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Hi Kirsten,
Dr.Seuss is a great pick, and I'm leaning towards the second option which has his pieces up front. I'd love to see his characters pop up in random areas, like in the dropdown menu
or their head icons pop up when you hover. I'm digging the blue, and I hope to see you build up on this since you have such fun design options for him. Great work!
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Hi Kirsten!

I love your colors, they're very playful and speak to Dr. Suess books! I like your first more but I feel it's very empty which I imagine you'll fix soon seeing as this is a prelim!
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Percy Ames

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Post by genevieve_dierenga »

Hi Kristen,

I really like both your layouts but I feel like I'm leaning more towards the second one because of the use of the illustrations. I think it would be fun to use more of the illustrations across more of the pages and try to incorporate them into part of the page. I also think it might be nice to have a bar across the top for navigation. looks great!

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