Project 1 Prelim

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Olivia_haltom
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Project 1 Prelim

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Hello! Here's a few ideas on the first website. I think I'm leaning towards the layout with organic shapes throughout, but let me know!
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Olivia Haltom

drkittenpagas
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Hi Olivia,
I think you could run with either design. I personally like the feel of the second design, it feels more modern and sleek to me...maybe its the button designs? I think they are both great!
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ChloieKonrad
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Post by ChloieKonrad »

Hi Olivia,

I think these are both great. I lean a little more to the second design. I love the color scheme it has, and it looks very clean to me.
I really don’t have much to say for improvements, maybe just adjust the white border around the photos so that its even fully around and not as thin in some spots.

I think you did a great job!
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kawinthrac
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Hi Olivia, your designs are looking great! Color choices are very nice. I also like how you mix font styles to emphasize somethings. I think the second design is a little bit more catching to my eyes. Maybe because it's brighter and more pop on artworks. I really don't have any thing to say. Maybe make the white framing consistency to all photos. Nice job!

Aub
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Hi! I'm a fan of the way the soft colors match the soft and subtle typeface. It gives off a gentle vibe on the website. I personally like the yellow design more with the neatly scattered squares everywhere because the other design seems like it has some empty space. The empty space isn't bad either I just lean more towards the first design.
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Hi Olivia,
You’ve created such beautiful designs. I think you did such a great job on capturing the designer’s style that this could very much be her very own website! I personally like the second design the most, as it really complements her work the best, in my opinion. Just to be nit-picky, make sure that your sides are the same width and that the borders around your images are all centered and equal. Very strong start! I’m excited to see the final result.
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Post by PAmes »

Olivia!

I'll never get over how perfect all your color schemes are, they never fail to mix perfectly with your designs! I'd say my only qualm is with your second mobile design, the Instagram posts don't feel right with the text beside them, it might look better with it on top unless space is an issue though I'm sure you can have it scroll!

Have a good night!
Thanks,
Percy Ames

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Post by ngrunwald »

Hi Olivia, both of your designs looks great, the color schemes you used for both work really well. I think that your second design is a little better, the colors you used work well together and make the images pop. Also the layout seems easy to navigate and looks very professional. Great work!

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Olivia, It is always your choice to make the final decision.
I feel you are trying to convey classy, and I am not sure using organic shapes would do that, yet I would have to see those shapes. I like the colors and I like the great organization of your thought process.
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