Project02 Preliminary

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LMisher
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Project02 Preliminary

Post by LMisher »

Hello Everyone!

Here's what I came up with for Project 2.
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Brainstorming2.jpg
Brainstorming1.jpg
SNAG2.jpg
style guide.jpg
SNAG1.jpg
thumbnails.jpg
Our Story2 Rough.png
Our Story2 Mobile Rough.png
Our Story1 Rough.png
Our Story1 Mobile Rough.png
Home2 Rough.png
Home2 Mobile Rough.png
Home1 Rough.png
Home1 Mobile Rough.png
According to Benjamin Disraeli, "The secret of success is to be ready when your opportunity comes". Let's make each day count!

LaTara :)

Cedar
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Re: Project02 Preliminary

Post by Cedar »

Hey LaTara,
Great work on this design. I like both designs but think the second version looks a little better with the off white background and the logo in the nav bar. I think if you like the purple from the first design you could easily do the second design's layout with the first design's color.
-Cedar

Seungwoo Lee
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Post by Seungwoo Lee »

Hello!

I think you really prepared a lot. I love your second design! I think the background color of the second design also goes well with your concept. This is my personal opinion. I wish your navigation bar and your logo were a little bit bigger!

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Emily-Hudson
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Hi LaTara,

I like the colors you're using for your roughs. I think the gradient behind your yellow text boxes/logo looks a bit weird. Its giving those text boxes an odd shape.

Looking forward to more!
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mmisson_01
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Post by mmisson_01 »

Hey LaTara,
Amazing work for these designs, they come across as very well balanced, hierarchical, and professional-looking! I feel like they are almost one step away from being a real live shopping website, you know? But to be completely honest I just really enjoy how they are laid out, especially in the second concept. I do wish that you will keep the almond-y colored background that you had used for your mobile format for the standard computer format as well since the white backdrop might be too harsh for the eyes. But besides that, I truly love the organic feeling that I get from these designs, can't wait to see which one you will choose in the end :D !
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kristenrothbauer
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Post by kristenrothbauer »

Hi LaTara!
These website roughs look great! You achieved a really great consistency within both designs that tie all the pages together and help create a brand image. But that second design is really calling to me! The brown and yellow-orange work so well together and connects extremely well with the goal of selling bundles! To add on, the way the images are laid out in this design is extremely dynamic and eye-catching as well. I cant wait to see the final website!
kristen rothbauer ━ ☆゚.*・。゚

ngrunwald
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Post by ngrunwald »

Hi LaTara,
Both of design loos really good, I think your design with the brown navbar background is working better than your purple version. The navigation on all of your layouts is good easy to find everything. I also like the color choices on your brown navbar design. They all work well together and have a nice feel overall. Great job

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