Project 2 Prelim

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ChloieKonrad
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Project 2 Prelim

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Hello Everyone,

For project two I decided to do a website for a party supply store. This website specifically sells pop star themed party kits such as Taylor Swift, Sabrina Carpenter, and Olivia Rodrigo.
I did one with a bit busier of a theme with lots of color and vibrancy, then the 2nd design is a bit more toned down and calm.
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drkittenpagas
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Hi Chloe,
I usually don't lean towards busier designs, but I think it absolutely fits your concept. I think that one would be really fun to flush out!
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onnimelon2
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Hello Chloe
I think the busy patterns and bright colors really work well for your brand and company, so I think you should go with the first design. Plus the logo looks really good too. I think making the shopping cart icon a little smaller to be flush at the top with the rest of the icons would look nice. Really fun concept
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Seungwoo Lee
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Hello Chloe,

I think your design is special. I think your theme and the colors you choose go well with each other. I personally like the second design! This is my personal opinion. I think there is so much information on your home page. Also, there are so many images and texts that it feels so full.

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Hello Chloie!

I think that you have two good looking websites. The colors, graphics and fonts work well; however, I think that it looks a little too busy on each version. A lot going there. I think that the second version is definitely my favorite. I look forward to see the final version. Good job!
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mmisson_01
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Hey Chloie,
I really like how the busy designs visually convey the same feelings of attending a party, where it's intense due to the blasting music and the colorful strobe lights, but its still super fun to be in, you know? I'm not really a fan of the second design due to the gray boundary boxes, but I do find it much more easier on the eyes and cleaner compared to the first concept. Maybe these gray boxes could be somewhat darker and transparent? That way, the hot pink text on top of them could stand out much more better as well since its fighting hard against the surrounding gray a little bit (but if you don't do this, maybe adding a white or black stroke around the letters could have the same results!). But moving on, I really like how both of these concepts look, so I wonder which one you might choose in the end :D I can't wait to see how it ends up!
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Hi Chloie,
I think that you did a great job with both of your design they both fit well with your brand and company. Out of the two I think that the one with the grey background works well and is busy but not too busy. Also, both of your layouts are easy to navigate and find everything. Great job

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