po2 prelim

[Olivia_haltom]

hello! I like my version with the bright purples and blues better but let me know!

[Melissa_Sanchez]

Hi Olivia,

I prefer your second set of designs. I think the color palette works better and I like the clean look they have. Im a big fan of stationary things! I think one thing I would change is adding those rounded rectangles around your navigation links in your mobile version.

[Cedar]

Hey Olivia,
Good job on these designs. I think I agree with you that I like the purple and blue better but I do think either of these designs could make a great site. One issue I do see with the purple and blue version is that the purple text gets lost a little in the light purple background.
-Cedar

[ChloieKonrad]

Hi Olivia,
I really like both color schemes, but I agree with you and prefer the first one.
I would make your text a bit darker so it has more contrast and doesn’t get lost in the background.

[LMisher]

Hello Olivia!

Great job on your rough drafts. Both are very creative and I really love your color schemes and font choices. It works really well. If I had to choose between the two versions, my version is the second one. Overall you did well and I can't wait to see what you do in the end!

[kawinthrac]

Hi Olivia, well done on both designs. I think both color schemes are beautiful. If I have to choose, I think the first one is a bit brighter and your products pop a little bit more than the second design (I am not sure why ). Also, texts are easier to read on the first design. If you go with the second design, you might want to increase contrast between text on the top banner ('final sale % off') and background color.

Kawinthra

[mars_sink]

Hi Olivia,

I like the second design layout and scheme more, I think the color palette is a lot easier to see and better for the theme and your overall goals for the website. I think this is going to be a cool website! Good luck, I cannot wait to see the final product.

[mmisson_01]

Hey Olivia,
Your designs are always so creative, colorful, and so full of whimsy! I love it !
I might be more biased towards the first concept than the second since I enjoy pink pastel colors more, but I would really recommend going with that one because it draws in my attention towards it the most. I think it might also be because of how vibrant the color scheme is that I can't help but be directed to it; especially paired with the deep blue hue for the text that stands out nicely against it well. And when looking at that from a marketing angle--justifies it all the more since I (and others) will be ultimately drawn to your products! However, my only suggestion to further improve your design would just be to incorporate 1 or 2 more fonts since every type visible in the images are relying on the same, singular font. But besides that, amazing work! Can't wait how to see how it is when it's fully operational as a real live website !

[kristenrothbauer]

Hi Olivia!
Both of your designs are executed so well! The color palette, typefaces, and imagery throughout all the pages are extremely cohesive and help create an image for the brand. I think I favor the rough01 set slightly more, the nav bar having more detail and design elements contributes a lot to the design. Overall, they both look great and I'm excited to see the final website!

[PAmes]

Hi Olivia!

Your idea is so cute! It comes across as very playful and welcoming.

Percy