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mars_sink
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drkittenpagas
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Hi Mars,
Your product line design is beautiful and on point, so cool!
One thing I would pay attention to in the future for your website is what parts are scrolling.
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goggei
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Hi Mars!
Love the colors and can design. The matching pattern and colors create a consistent design on all the pages. I would only change responsiveness on some items, like the moth in the nav bar. Overall, this looks great, and I love the idea :D!
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Emily-Hudson
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Hi Mars,

I really like your sites colors! It looks good. The logo is cute, and I like the work you did on the cans. My only nitpick would be to maybe choose a nice font for the title of the website, since its a bit boring as the regular serif font. Great work!
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Hi Mars,
Your illustrations and design are stunning! I really love your logo and that hand drawn feel that your website has. The texture on your can labels was a wonderful touch. My only suggestion would be to center the contact container and increase its width to better fill the page. Overall, you did a great job!
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Hey Mars,
Really love the style and color scheme that you had gone with for this website! I really like how the red and pink moth stands out against the overall dark, mossy green background, and on the multi-colored cans for the cider flavors available as well--its all very visually interesting and reminds me of a indie, craft beer vibe, you know? I also really enjoy the font choices used as well throughout the site, and how uniquely-customized, but fitting ( as in with the rest of the website) the checkout/cart page looks. My only criticism with your design is just with the scrolling functionality. For some reason it's showing two scrollbars on the right side, especially on the home page which I think might be due to a picture of cider barrels being placed outside too far out than intended. But besides that, I really do enjoy how this website looks and reads, great job! :D
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ngrunwald
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Hi Mars,
Your website looks really good. I think your logo looks good and I like the colors your used for your website, the floral background you used looks good with your logo. Its also super cool what you did with the cans and made them yourself. Overall everything flows really well and your site is easy to navigate. Great job

kevin_ksk
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Mars,

Love the design of the cans and the concept. Very nice job with the website. There's some places where the words are falling off but overall great job!
Kevin Kruitbosch 8-)

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Hi! I love how the dark colors and fonts all work together to create this site. The sliding element from page to page is also a really nice function you added. Great job!
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Mars, The logo and branding were calming and pleasing and your preplanning really shows the work you did to create this great product site. The text wrap lesson we did could have been used to properly wrap your text inside the shapes. It is a fun name that is catchy and would be easy to market.
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