Thank You

Post links to your Project Three websites and preliminary work for discussion and feedback.
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BrandonBarringer
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Thank You

Post by BrandonBarringer »

Still pretty rough. Trying to figure out how these will look at different resolutions. I think I will end up coloring the backgrounds different and losing the images for mobile resolutions
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brienicole
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I kind of like the "green" and haha on your choice of "person" thingy thing.
Brie Porterfield

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joshua.miles
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Post by joshua.miles »

I like your concept. The colors and typography are working well. Instead of making the background solid you should just crop the images differently to fit on the specific resolution. Just a thought. Nice work.

Joshua

kylesmith
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Looks pretty cool. Will totally live or die by the photography though. I would like to see different images that represent each page. I feel like keeping the same image for even two pages will confuse users. I also hate the block of text that is all caps. No real reason to ever do that in my book, at least for a full paragraph. If you like that look i would recommend using a font that is all caps but the lowercase caps are a bit smaller than the caps caps. That would help...sorta. IMO just make it sentence case and call it good.
Kyle Smith

MissTinaBodden
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Post by MissTinaBodden »

Your designs are cool and the aesthetic is pleasing. I am just unsure on your inspiration. Also the images are a little distracting.
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miss_kristine
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Post by miss_kristine »

Interesting concept, but I like the predominant imagery and the typography so far.

treesa
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Post by treesa »

I like the sepia concept, yes I think you need different images for each page. Also 'you're' is misspelled

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