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Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 3:57 pm
by georgia_novotny
Hi Adam,
I like both of your design ideas for your Sk8 Spot, great name/logo!
I think I am leaning towards the 1st design roughs.
I like the skating photos you used and how you laid them out.
I also like the second pages look because it looks more organized than the second page in the 2nd designs.
I would try to make the homepage less visual, something is making me feel like its a little chaotic.
I think maybe I would take out the background photo and add a less detailed photo for the background.
Like a textured photo of the jumps or road kind of thing.
Great start, good job!
Georgia
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:14 pm
by kamilyon
I think you did a good job, I like your use of colors. I do like the second comp with the big wheels alot better. That design of the whole page i feel works the best
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 5:51 pm
by c.j.jackson775
The layout is coming along but it is very busy and it is hard for me to nail down a good place to start. Try stepping back from the image background or making some of the boxes have less imagery. Achieve a zin balance.
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 6:44 pm
by Kiwakooo
I like your design especially first rough. The all information are very organized.
I also like your logo.
I think you can play with fonts more. I like the font you used in the second rough.
It is hard to read fonts with the outline.
Good job!
Kiwako
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2015 7:02 pm
by ashleighporterfield
Based on what I can see, I do like the layout of your first design better. I do think its a bit cluttered though. I feel like you could make your shipping logos smaller and maybe arrange them to a spot that isn't necessarily as centered, if that makes sense. Great job so far though! I look forward to seeing more!
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 9:35 pm
by ravennvrmre
I would go with the bottom one personally, the top background is a little distracting and you can't really go wrong with blue and white. I really like the logo it works really well. Great start.
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:04 pm
by stalksyouatnight
The first design could look better if you give things space, I think the back ground could work but there needs to be less noise. The second design is cleaner, but too simple, i think if you can some how change things up it will look more appealing.
Re: Project One Roughs
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2016 1:42 am
by ravens.way
I like the color scheme in both designs. The layout in rough 2 is easier to read and see. The navigation on rough 1 is easier to see. I think these two items would work well together. Nice job.