Re: Project #3_Roughs
Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:09 pm
Hi Danielle,
Great choice in inspiration. My favorite of your two is the bottom design. I feel like the imagery, colors, and typography really blend together well! Stick with that sort of calming, soft feel of things. Plus, that little light/lantern thing hovering between the top headline is way cool. A cool idea would to give it some kind of outer glow, that will really make it visually interesting. Aside from that, I think you have a solid concept to go off of. I'd also consider making the main body copy justified, but that's my personal opinion. Nice work!
Great choice in inspiration. My favorite of your two is the bottom design. I feel like the imagery, colors, and typography really blend together well! Stick with that sort of calming, soft feel of things. Plus, that little light/lantern thing hovering between the top headline is way cool. A cool idea would to give it some kind of outer glow, that will really make it visually interesting. Aside from that, I think you have a solid concept to go off of. I'd also consider making the main body copy justified, but that's my personal opinion. Nice work!