I like your rough 1.
It's very clean and all information is very organized.
I think some texture on the background would make it better.
Other than that, I really like it.
Good job!
Kiwako
Sir Jony Ive, P3 - JJ
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Re: Sir Jony Ive, P3 - JJ
Jonathan,
I really like these designs. I'm leaning to the second roughs more. I like the backgrounds and it's easy to navigate. The first rough reminds me a little of Steve Jobs. So it's feels a little too familiar to me. My suggestion for rough two is working on the type. But overall, great job.
I really like these designs. I'm leaning to the second roughs more. I like the backgrounds and it's easy to navigate. The first rough reminds me a little of Steve Jobs. So it's feels a little too familiar to me. My suggestion for rough two is working on the type. But overall, great job.
Dalanie "TsukiMizu" Chester
Cosplayer/Artist/Daydreamer
"All work and no play makes the imagination a dull reality."
-Dalanie Chester
Cosplayer/Artist/Daydreamer
"All work and no play makes the imagination a dull reality."
-Dalanie Chester