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Re: Sir Jony Ive, P3 - JJ

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:16 pm
by Kiwakooo
I like your rough 1.
It's very clean and all information is very organized.
I think some texture on the background would make it better.

Other than that, I really like it.
Good job!

Kiwako

Re: Sir Jony Ive, P3 - JJ

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2015 6:20 pm
by TsukiMizuDCC
Jonathan,

I really like these designs. I'm leaning to the second roughs more. I like the backgrounds and it's easy to navigate. The first rough reminds me a little of Steve Jobs. So it's feels a little too familiar to me. My suggestion for rough two is working on the type. But overall, great job.