Project 1 roughs

[ravens.way]

I like both designs but version 1 stood out for me the most. It seemed to portray the purpose of the drink. Your navigation was positioned nicely. Version 2 is nice but your version 1 is better I think.

[killcomicsans]

love your first design! it seems like you're really thinking about the site being responsive. but i also really dig the lined up bottles with the colored bars (i feel like you should use it somewhere still). maybe a combination? great work

[gr8ful1]

Hi Joe, sorry for late critique! I prefer your first designs, they are more informative and sell your product better I think, since they immediately convey that it is a sports drink with the imagery. I'm not sure if that is your final design for your product pages, but you might try to describe the flavors themselves I guess, instead of just describing the benefits of the drink in general. My only other suggestion would be to make your bottom navigation all the same size, it seems unbalanced in different sizes. Good work!