project 1 prelim critique magic

[ravens.way]

I like the creativity in your site. The color scheme and font styles you used suits your design. Your rough 2 is easier to read and navigate.

[killcomicsans]

this is so cool and whimsical! i dig it. I think the first design flows better and the navigation is more straight forward. good work!

[gr8ful1]

I really love your first design! Great job on illustrating! I love the font on the logo, and I love the font for body copy, but that one is hard to read as small as it is, and I'm not sure how legible it would be on a smaller device. I might also try to highlight your welcome paragraph, or make it bigger than the rest of your sections so the eye has that to go to. Right now my eye is caught by the social media links first, not your products. Your potion page is awesome, I love how creative and different they all are! They all have their own personalities!