Page 1 of 1
Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2013 2:59 pm
by Alexey
Hi, everybody. These are my very first and roughly roughs for my website.
My sister is an amateur artist and she always wanted to have a web gallery for her self. (For these roughs I did not use her work yet)
She wanted her website pretty simple and straightforward, but at the same creative.
I still have a lot of work to do, and might change something in my design in the future.
But now I am just sharing with you my ideas.
Thanks
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2013 5:46 pm
by Alexey
So, we were sitting together with my sister, I was moving things around in Photoshop and she finally approved this version
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:11 pm
by re8ecca
Hi Alexey - I'll just talk about your latest update, since that's the one your sister approved.
I really like her logo at the bottom, and I'm just wondering if that can be used more effectively to establish her identity. I'd try to incorporate the logo into the navigation so that it's at the top.
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 2:10 pm
by UnKool Moe Dee
Alexey,
The layout is very clean and the spacing is visually pleasing. I agree with Rebecca about using the logo more prominently and I also think using color to draw the eye through the page ( in the form of a footer). Nice work so far.
Aharon
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2013 1:39 pm
by markp
Alexey,
I really like the gallery lighting at the top and the paint strokes for buttons. great logo. the copy has a nice
message. I look forward to seeing some of your sister's work
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2013 10:15 pm
by donnalouwho
your sister must be really proud of you. great job on all designs. i think i like the first one best; nice layout, clean, simple and it highlights the art nicely. although they are all fantastic. can't wait to see it finished.
Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 6:24 pm
by brianfreemantmcc
I prefer layout 1. It is nice!