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Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:09 pm
by HouseStark
Here is my project one final for everyone to look at. There will be some updates on the current pages for the next part of this project (two). Let me know what you think and appreciate any feedback.

http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_20 ... index.html

Ciao,
MKO

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2018 11:37 am
by selvester
Your website is coming together nicely. I think you chose the right rough to run with. The color scheme and the brick wall picture play off each other nicely. Your navigation for the different articles of clothing pops of the turquoise background. However I feel as though your nav should be located at the top of the website instead of at the bottom.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 5:55 pm
by kieley_smith
I adore the color scheme you went with, so summery and vintage! I also like the typeface you chose, it goes well with the whole fashion idea. I feel like the site would benefit from having different images in each pages header, though. There's so many beautiful clothes in the world, show them off! As one last teeny tiny critique, the bottom navbar looks a little bit squished. especially compared to the spacing you used for the top navbar. Other than that, it looks great! : )

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 7:35 pm
by Breezy
Hey,

I love the vintage feel you got going on here! I would make the images just a bit bigger but over all awesome job!

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 12:40 pm
by fjbo
Really Good Job!

Your site is very nice, has a fun color palette, consistent design, its easy to read, and has imagery.

The only thing: Responsiveness. Your site needs to be responsive.

Again, very good job!

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 3:29 pm
by Eduardo_Garcia
Hello,
your website is truly appealing! The color scheme is intriguing, nav is easy to use, and the overall layout is great!
Would center text and MB logo below the images. Would have a dropdown menu for Products, to place bottom nav up top.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 3:59 pm
by Peelio
The design is colorful and uplifting. The colors tie the design together. There is a good sense of typography in the design. The design would look more uniform if the images were all the same size and format.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:53 pm
by Instructor
This one just has a great feel to it. Really sets the tone for the shop.

It's colors are it's real strength. They're both modern and retro, which works great for what you are trying to establish here. There's good contrast throughout, too. The yellow and the teal work so well together. I also like the use of drop shadows throughout. And that brick texture at the top! It immediately draws the eye and makes the website look like an upcycled old building which is the kind of thing you'd find an antique store/vintage clothing shop in. Your type works well too. I especially like the use of weights and italics to establish an immediate hierarchy. Your photo collage instantly creates an aesthetic that echoes the rest of the layout and hints to consumers what kind of products they'll find inside.

Your drop shadows all seem to be coming from different light sources, though. The bottom margin on the secondary nav is way too tight. It needed more room to breathe. I think, with all of the excellent texturing and shadow work of the rest of the composition, the pages need something extra at the separation points between the header, content and footer. Maybe a drop shadow, maybe a texture shift, I'm not sure.

Nice work!

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 11:48 pm
by Cassie_Bowers
The colors are so nice in this website. They really give it that vintage feel. The yellow type really pops off the blue background.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 1:11 pm
by Marco horta
Hello!

I really love this retro design, very well colors combination, the typography contrasts very nicely with the background, it is clean design really easy to navigate. congratulation this site is amazing.