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Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2018 7:23 pm
by Eduardo_Garcia
Hello everyone, here are my Catalog page roughs

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2018 10:51 am
by HouseStark
I like catalog 1 it has a cleaner look, on the other one I seem to be drawn to the black outline around the product, and not necessarily the product. Nice job!

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2018 3:56 pm
by selvester
Since the rectangular box is not consistent throughout your website, I wouldn't introduce it here in your product page. The top layout matches your overall web design, I would go with that one.

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2018 1:37 am
by fjbo
Not a lot to discuss here.

Your first layout is definitely more consistent and modern. Enclosing your products in boxes is not necessary. Your left side tend to feel "heavier" due to the darkness and saturation of black over the lightness of white. I can see it was a design choice, but it would be worth it to balance it a bit more. Since your background is white, having white products placed on white background literally turns your white products into negative space. I would use a light gray background or add some texture to the background.

Other than that your site is very straight-forward and conventional for an online store.

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2018 6:47 pm
by Stephski
Hello!
Your first rough preserves the very basic layout you originally developed. I think that less is more here!

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2018 4:59 am
by kieley_smith
Hey there! I think your top rough is definitely the one to go with. It's much cleaner and more professional than the secondary option, where the boxes are kind of choking the product.

Also, the vertical orientation of the rows are very pleasing to the eye, and it'll be much easier to add additional products to the page without feeling too lopsided if you don't add enough for an entire row.

Good luck! : )

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2018 10:34 am
by Cassie_Bowers
I like your first rough. I think it works better with your basic brand because it’s more simplified.

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 1:22 pm
by Breezy
Hey,

I like your catalog page 1 better! Awsome job!

Re: Project Two - Roughs EG

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2018 12:07 pm
by Instructor
Hm. I actually like the your first one better.

The lack of outlines around your products make the first one feel more "Basic", as it were. I also like it's larger margins between the products and the other objects. The second one feels a little too cluttered mostly because of the outlines and tighter spacing. I also like the continuation of the perfect cleanliness of your design. Such a great use of contrast and layout. It punches way above it's weight. For some reason I'm picturing this stuff in super expensive antiseptically clean stores that are entirely decorated in black and white. And the hoodies sell for like $900. And there's a line out front.

My only issue with it, is where is your product information going to be? In a tooltip or popup? You'll need to inform your buyers about your products somewhere in there.

Good work!