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Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2023 3:30 pm
by YoAdrian!
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2023 4:41 pm
by Cole_Richarrds
Hi Johnna! I really like your concepts and you main idea, I think that the second concept is the stronger, I would change the navigation, add some grunge to the buttons and maybe skew them slightly, I think that would add some visual interest. I really like the colors in the second concept as well. Well done!
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2023 10:08 am
by bmeyer
Hi Johnna!
I think your company is so cute and unique. I really like your first design. It feels very modern and I like the negative space. My only advice would be to incorporate the orange in more of the design. Maybe for the boxes around the merch? Overall, good job!
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2023 10:15 pm
by isaacm03
Hi Johnna!
You have yourself a great website right now! I love the concept and although the wanted output is something new, I know you can handle it. You should consider thickening up the strokes on the boxes to match the lightning bolt in the header. Great work!
Isaac
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 3:14 pm
by bdawg11
Hi Johnna,
I love this idea for a website. I am liking the second design more. I think the colors are better. Although I think that I like the first home page design better.
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 5:57 pm
by mckenzie
Hey! Of course, you brought something original and very visually pleasing to the table. Who would've thought of different kinds of rocks as products? when can I buy one? The only thing I would say is maybe sprucing up the background with even just some super big shapes? It might be distracting but some things to try. So excited to see how this turns out!
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 8:18 pm
by Cj9497
I like the second rough the best it doesn't feel cluttered like the others. The color choice works better also in that rough also. Good job
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2023 7:07 pm
by Christopher B
Hi Johnna,
Nice job on the website, it rocks:) I like the white background the best and I think it evokes a comic book feel.
Potential concepts: invoke/evoke comic book style graphics for buttons and other content.....
Well done!
Re: Project 2 - Prelim YOU ROCK!
Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2023 1:00 pm
by Instructor
Johnna, this is hilarious. I like the 1st concept, but the thing that is keeping me back from the 2nd, is too many items atop the record, the master rock is enough right? If you do end up using the 2nd, the play buttons are great. Not sure about green as its background. The hand on the logo being your main logo? Fun that you are selling real merchandise too. I guess their shipping will be more if they want to add the weight of a rock.