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Project 03
Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2023 11:27 pm
by liv-lil_cactux
Needs images and more attention to margins on inner pages/ mobile. but this is basic concept
Re: Project 03
Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2023 6:00 am
by Cj9497
Hello classmate,
I really enjoy the dark blue concept it sticks out. The black and blue work well together. I really like the space you will have in between the imagery. The one thing I would work on is making sure everything of equal spacing.
Re: Project 03
Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2023 6:36 pm
by bmeyer
Hi Liv,
I also like the blue concept the best. The blue and white color scheme will create a good contrast. My only suggestion would be to make the subheads a bit smaller. Good job!
Re: Project 03
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:21 pm
by Cole_Richarrds
Hi, I like your designs a lot, the layout is nice and I like the colors for both, I think the blue one plays better, I would change the font for the titles of pages, something a bit less expressive, otherwise well done!
Re: Project 03
Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2023 10:19 pm
by Christopher B
Hi liv-lil_cactux,
The bottom version (green with Tree Huggers) is by far the best. Consider a nav bar that isn't black, so it complements the green better. Have fun with it!
Re: Project 03
Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2023 10:13 am
by YoAdrian!
Hi Liv,
I think I like your green design better! Can't wait to see your logo, plus I a sucker for tree hugger anything! I might try a different style navigation, maybe go with the hamburger menu throughout, but make it a tree icon instead of the three lines? I really like your 60's typeface choice too. Nice work.
Re: Project 03
Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2023 10:19 pm
by isaacm03
Hi Liv,
Good work here! To my eye, the green looks a bit better than the blue! I would consider changing the color of the nav bar green to something slightly different, as it feels too separate from the cool color scheme you have going on.
Isaac
Re: Project 03
Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 3:32 pm
by Osmar_Sandoval
Hey Liv,
For this design I believe the darker colors of it works good for the tree hugging event. Although I would choose a different font for the subheads, as the rounded bubble one works better for the water fight, unless you'd like a more 70's peace feel when it comes to tree hugging. Nice work!
Re: Project 03
Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:25 pm
by Instructor
Liv, I like how your stable Bauhaus layout is contrasted by your bloaty fun font which brings it alive. I think a slight gradient on background colors could work. Water fight fund raising to save the trees?