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Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Fri Sep 13, 2024 6:56 pm
by Cedar
Here is my project 1 prelim. I chose to do this project on a local artist in Reno named Janis Ni. Seeing her paintings as a kid growing up were what inspired me to start practicing art as well as pursue a career in graphic design.

This is my first version, below is the web browser version of the home page and the current works gallery.
project01_rough01_home_webbrowser.jpg
project01_rough01_currentwork_webbrowser.jpg
Here is the mobile version of the home page and current works gallery.
project01_rough01_home_mobile.jpg
project01_rough01_currentwork_mobile.jpg
This is my second version, starting with the web browser version of the home page and the current works page.
project01_rough02_home_webbrowser.jpg
project01_rough02_currentwork_webbrowser.jpg
and finally the mobile versions.
project01_rough02_home_mobile.jpg
project01_rough02_currentwork_mobile.jpg

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2024 11:35 am
by drkittenpagas
Hi Cedar,
I love both your layouts and I think either one could work splendidly. I'm drawn to dark themes, so I like the top, I also like how you handled the pictures in the type! So Cool!

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2024 12:04 pm
by Melissa_Sanchez
Hello Cedar,

I like your first sets of designs. The images in the type and their color give a good contrast against the black background which make them pop out! I think they look professional and slick. If you were to go with your second design homepage I would recommend lowering the opacity of the background art/image that way the text is more visible.

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2024 9:08 pm
by Aub
Hi I like the design you did with the name and the background, that's a really cool effect! The black background makes the whole thing pop out aswell so good job on that. With the other font you used where some lines are thin I did find them a little hard to read, maybe you could play around with that font or find a similar but more thick font for that? Maybe it's just me who can't read it though.

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2024 3:05 pm
by Olivia_haltom
Hello! I love your first design idea, with the see though block letters. This design choice was super clever and eye catching. I think your layouts express the artist well and Im excited too see how far your will go with these ideas! Great job

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2024 2:27 pm
by Ashton_H
Hello,
I really love the first designs, I'm curious as to how you got the images inside of the letters. The first layout is very professional and I think it works well, The only thing id play around with is maybe make the navigation just a solid color or choose brighter paintings to contrast the black. it does feel a little confusing having the images within the navigation but I think the white bar you added separates them very well. good job! I really like your designs!

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:21 pm
by PAmes
Hi Cedar!

I absolutely love the magazine feel of your second design, it's very fun and appealing to look at! I love your first design as well it's very clean and eye-catching with the desire to look closer at each piece inside the letters!

Have a good night!

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:55 pm
by ngrunwald
Hi Cedar,
Both of your designs look great, I like how you had the name be the window for the images. I personally like the first design the best as it is simple. but eye catching. Your layout seems easy to navigate as well. Good work!

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2024 9:15 pm
by Instructor
Cedar,
It is always your choice to make the final decision.
I would have liked to see how placement of text would change your balance.
V1 is great (sorry, t-shirts that do that have burned me out, yet I noticed the class prefers v1, and v2 is excellent, I am loving its background scaled back wallpaper images, The opacity is perfect!