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Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 11, 2024 11:37 pm
by Cedar
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Wed Oct 16, 2024 9:26 pm
by Instructor
Excellent looking site. I like the cut out letters, colors are catchy.
Please Use metatag keywords/Description.
Excellent on responsive, keywords, layout design.
You can be quite proud of this site!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 8:43 am
by Seungwoo Lee
Hello. It's a really well-made website. All sections are well-moveable. Also, I think it's a really good idea to put an image inside the name of the influencer. My personal opinion is that it would have been nice if the background color was anything other than black. Really well-made!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 8:58 pm
by kawinthrac
Hi Cedar, I really like your home page. The cut out looks really great! You may consider to make 'EARLY WORK' and 'CURRENT WORK' link to subpages. It's not critical though. You images link work well. Great work!
Kawinthra
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 9:34 pm
by goggei
Hi Cedar,
This is a well-done website
That homepage pops out, especially with the work of the artist. The only thing I would change would possibly be the width of the textbox on mobile; it drags down a bit rather than being fully responsive. Great work!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 10:02 pm
by mars_sink
Hi Cedar,
This is a super cool website! I am so impressed and envious, honestly. This is an excellent design, concept, and great code. I really like everything you implemented into your site, it's clean and well organized. Great job!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 10:21 pm
by mmisson_01
Hey Cedar,
Absolutely amazing work! I really love how well the homepage responds when the window is narrowed down and how the type stacks on top of each other. I also think that it's very cool to have Janis Ni's artwork visible throughout the type, it contrasts beautifully against the black background and makes it all the more eye-captivating. The only criticism that I have on mind is just with the picture on the "about" page--when squashing the width of the website's window, the image squishes as well. I think for that you could have had the image fall below or above the text so that it would keep its measurements. Maybe even moving it to the center of the black boundary box would have helped as well, but with the rest of the website already looking amazing and functioning perfectly, it overshadows that minor detail completely. Again, amazing work Cedar, can't wait to see your next
!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 11:00 pm
by kevin_ksk
Cedar,
I love the home page with the imagery inside the text. I like the artwork as the background. I think experimenting with different layouts throughout the site could've made the site more visually engaging.
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2024 3:37 pm
by shasta_m0ri
Cedar,
I love the aesthetic of your site. It is very bold with the black background and the images inside the slab serif type. In the mobile version, the body copy shows up as very squished and could use more room to breathe. The images also show up very small. I think if you just add a media query that changes the width percentage of the container you put those items in, for mobile, you will be okay.