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Aub
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Yeah this needs lots of work since some of my stuff broke but heres what I have anyways.

https://www.grc275.com/student/fall-202 ... project02/
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I like How your color choices pop out in your design such as the bright vibrant red against the black and white elements. I think one thing I would change is making the email information higher on the page instead of having to scroll to the bottom with all that space.

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Hi Aubrey!!

It gets a little weird on the ipad but it's the ipad so it's bound to be weird! but I love it you managed to get your message across even more and it looks wonderful!

Percy
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Hey Aubrey,
Good job on your site! I really like your use of the simple black and white along with the bright red highlight. I think you created a color pattern that really catches the eye. One thing I think that could improve your site is adding a couple pictures of the product on the "about the products" page, I think this would help connect the names of the products to what the customer actually receives. Great work!
-Cedar

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Post by hazzie.jpg »

Hi Aubrey,
I think you did a really nice job with the design and layout. The design looks clean and professional. Stuff breaks and I understand just how frustrating that can be, but I can see what you’ve envisioned and the brand you created is very solid. Once you’re able to resolve the issues that broke, I’m confident it will be perfect. Great work!
˙˚∘⊹Hazzie Castaneda⊹∘˚˙

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Post by LMisher »

Hey Aubrey!

You did a good job on this assignment. The color choices were great and I liked the images chosen. My only suggestions would be remove the background images and make them smaller so that they don't appear blurry or out of focus. Other than that, well done!
According to Benjamin Disraeli, "The secret of success is to be ready when your opportunity comes". Let's make each day count!

LaTara :)

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Post by ngrunwald »

Hi Aubrey,
Your design looks really good regardless of the troubles you had with it. It looks really professional and well organized. I really like how you split your catalog pages up and organized them. Your website has great navigation and everything is easy to find which is also nice. Great job

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Aubrey,

Great job on your website! It looks very sleek and modern. Interesting designs on the mouse. I think the website is a little bit too big on the page and it would look even better if that was fixed.
Kevin Kruitbosch 8-)

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Hello! I love the clean, simple look to this site. The neon colors on the mouses are cool and I like how this site seems to appear to gamers specifically. great job overall!
Olivia Haltom

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Aubrey, I like the bold big home page it grabs my attention. Keep working on your response skills. Simple color scheme allows me to concentrate on your message.
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