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project 3 prelim (late)

Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2024 4:04 pm
by mars_sink
Ive had no internet and too many things happened at once. sorry. Heres my prelim.

Re: project 3 prelim (late)

Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2024 10:53 am
by Melissa_Sanchez
Hi Mars,

I really like your first set of designs. I think the blue color scheme you have is really working well! I also like the frame in your design. If I were to change one thing I would probably take the stroke off your body-copy text and just leave it with a fill.

Re: project 3 prelim (late)

Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2024 2:46 pm
by Olivia_haltom
Hi! I love the designs with the blue color scheme. The dark green is a nice color but it makes everything else a bit harder to read. I also like the swirls in the background, they are really playful! Good luck, and I cant wait to see the finished site when its done

Re: project 3 prelim (late)

Posted: Tue Nov 19, 2024 4:05 pm
by Instructor
Mars, I like the first design, and if you go with that, even though cursive lends a classy touch, more and more people cannot read cursive, so perhaps you may need to consider audience and go with 2nd font. I really like your thumbnails you posted.The old green really works for me. I know you will be sure to keep your text inside the frames.Your Oregon Festival image is perfect!

Re: project 3 prelim (late)

Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2024 11:04 pm
by Aub
Hi! Good work on the two styles you have going on, I think it's up to you what you want to choose. Maybe play around with the fonts, I think that having too much cursive can look nice and pretty but also strain the reader's eyes.