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project3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 12:48 am
by Aub
Yeah this is super late and Im missing a bunch of stuff like other options but here you go

Re: project3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 7:32 pm
by hazzie.jpg
Hi Aubrey,
The Reno Balloon Race is on of my favorite local events that I attend religiously every year! I like your very clean design layout and I think that it’s going to turn out really well. I have two suggestions. The first one being that I think you should use more consistent fonts within your layout and the second suggestion being that I would make sure that all of your images are large enough so they don’t get pixelated on larger displays. Great job, I’m looking forward to seeing your final project!

Re: project3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 9:29 pm
by PAmes
Aubrey!

Fellow balloon racer (real)

I love your color choices they're very fun on the eyes and just generally pretty! Excited to see where you take this!

Re: project3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 9:43 pm
by goggei
Hi Aubrey,
I'm glad someone is doing the Reno balloon races; it's a fun event! Your layouts are clean, and I love the prominent image of the air balloons on the home page. The placement of your heading is also perfect in the image. If you could add a touch of color in the other pages to match(like more hot air balloons but with a lower opacity), I think it would help keep it consistent compared to your homepage. Overall, great work, and I'm excited to see the final product!

Re: project3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 11:01 pm
by onnimelon2
Hello Aubrey!
Even though it's late at least you have something! I agree with the other comments that I do like your color choices. I absolutely love that banner text with the balloon image you've chosen. I don't really see that font anywhere else, I love how balloon-like and retro it looks. I highly recommend using that font for your head titles! Making that headline text for your paragraphs bigger would also make your design even stronger.