Sooo late! Project 2

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drkittenpagas
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Sooo late! Project 2

Post by drkittenpagas »

Hi All :)
These are my simple beginning ideas1
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Kirsten Pargas

Cedar
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Re: Sooo late! Project 2

Post by Cedar »

Hi Kristen,
Great work on these designs, I absolutely love the logo you came up with for this project. It is visually interesting as well as simple and quickly recognizable. One thing that I think could be improved is the contrast on both designs. The white text for me really gets lost in your background colors. I think a darker background could solve this if you want to stick with the white.

-Cedar

Seungwoo Lee
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Re: Sooo late! Project 2

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Hello Kristen,

I think your web design is good. I think your web design concept and background color go well with each other. This is my personal opinion. I think it's better to change the color of your web multi-brand logo to another color. Also, I think it's better to change the color to another color than the white font! You did a great work!

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Post by hazzie.jpg »

Hi Kristen,
Beautiful logo! I personally love the color of your first layout, but I do agree with our peer who said that there needs to be more contrast. I think that your secondary color should be a color that has more contrast and stands out from the background. Additionally, I really enjoy the way your logo font feels, but I believe that if the logo's font were solid, it would stand out even more. Great concepts!
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LMisher
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Post by LMisher »

Hello Kristen!

First, I wanted to say that I think that your web designs and graphics are beautiful, and I especially love your colors. The only suggestion that I would make is to make the font color darker like a black, dark brown, etc. so that it's easier to read. Also, it would have been cool to see your thumbnails, SNAG and other working graphics to see your thought process behind the scenes. Aside from that, you did and really good job and I look forward to seeing the final product.
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Hi Kristen, I really like your logo. I think the first design is pop more. Background color is brighter and contrast with logo. You might want to make headline/title of you site pop a little more.

Kawinthra

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mmisson_01
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Post by mmisson_01 »

Hey Kirsten,
I really enjoy how these concepts look, especially with that image of the orange-leafed bonsai against the green background. I feel like this one in particular stands out the most to me in the first design since the green background is much more vibrant and truly-zen motivating. My only suggestion to improving this design would be just maybe adding in a subtle blue gradient near the bottom of the background so that it would be more softer for the eyes. But I do think that you are off to a wonderful start for this project :) I can't wait to see it when it's finished!
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Aub
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Re: Sooo late! Project 2

Post by Aub »

Hi, I think the second design color is a better option because design 1 with the lighter green isn't helping to show off the white text. Maybe you can make the text a different color to help it pop out or just choose a different background color overall but otherwise the layout is nice in itself
Aubrey Delos Reyes

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