Project 2 Final DCC

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TsukiMizuDCC
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Project 2 Final DCC

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http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_20 ... ore_2.html

Hey guys.

Well, here's the final of my website. Still to tinker with a few things, but hopefully manage to get everything in tip top shape.
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Dalanie "TsukiMizu" Chester
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georgia_novotny
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Post by georgia_novotny »

Hi Dalanie,
I really like the colors you choose for your overall look.
I love the cherry blossoms, they really give you a clean, fresh, spiritual feeling.

I would fix the banner as its not staying centered and moves when the screen is enlarged.
The logo is still confusing to me and for a branding and marketing purpose you might want it to be a little more legible.

Good job!
Georgia

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Post by recordd »

Hi Dalanie! Great job on your final website girl! Your simplistic layout is easy to navigate through, you can locate your products right away, & the our history page is informative about your company. All of these make up an effective business website. I have a few suggestions for you...one, I think you could add more details and an add to cart button to each one of your products. Second, you are probably working on already but I would suggest to center your navigation bar and make the font a little larger. Otherwise, awesome job and keep up your hard work! :-)
Danielle Record
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You've got a very nice idea going here Delanie.

I like the color scheme and layout. They really put me at peace. The navigation is crisp and easy to use. The imagery is well chosen to compliment the colors and clean, meditative layout. The products seem to be well organized and easy to navigate to.

Unfortunately, I don't see any links to a shopping cart or contact form. I really need to see those for this project. Also, some of your layout objects are fixed and some are floating. That means the site shatters as the browser window expands much beyond whatever size you designed it in.

Not a bad concept, but undone by technical issues. Good try!
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lingling_chen
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Post by lingling_chen »

Hi, Dalanie
As you know I mention that before on your project one, I like your color scheme , but I still feel bad that your issues still there and haven’t been solved yet. I hope you can fix it by tonight. See you in the class. Keep up your hard work and good luck.

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Again, I'm really enjoying your whole concept. I think it's awesome and wonderfully creative. Your colors are effective for the overall theme, and really encourage the user to feel calm. Unfortunately I'm having the same issues as with preliminary in that your navigation bar seems fitted to the left, and your main container is floating to the right. Aside from that your products looks great, and it's easy to understand and navigate. Nice work!
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Hi Dalanie!

I really like your concept. The color scheme is very tranquil and is a nice fit with your product. A couple of things to look at are, 1. center the navigation and 2. put a doorstop into the product page so that your name is in the footer like the rest of the pages. Good job kid!
Paula Burris
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I really like the colors really nice and peaceful feeling. I don't know if its just on my computer but the purple petals in the background is sticking the left half side of the page and their is a blank space to the left.
Elizabeth Mejia

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Post by Kiwakooo »

I enjoyed your design.
You used colors and images effectively.

I think the font size of body copy is too big. Also, I would put more spaces in the text box.

Good job!

Kiwako

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Re: Project 2 Final DCC

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the line on top is not centered. I enjoy the color of your website

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