Hey there Kiwako,
Beautiful designs. I'm leaning to the black roughs more. I like the idea of the image slider. Easy to navigate, even as a mobile. I recommend working on the body copy to fill some of the space on the design. But great job.
Project3 rough
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Re: Project3 rough
Dalanie "TsukiMizu" Chester
Cosplayer/Artist/Daydreamer
"All work and no play makes the imagination a dull reality."
-Dalanie Chester
Cosplayer/Artist/Daydreamer
"All work and no play makes the imagination a dull reality."
-Dalanie Chester
Re: Project3 rough
Hi Kiwako,
I love everything about your second rough. The logo, images, typefaces, simplicity, all of it! It looks like you have a lot of grungy textures you could use, I'd try and incorporate that more into your design. Maybe add a super light crackling texture to the main container. I'm also a fan of the left alignment you decided to use, instead of a justified, it really works with your look. I really can't think of anything to improve. This is wonderful, and will work great as a mobile design.
I love everything about your second rough. The logo, images, typefaces, simplicity, all of it! It looks like you have a lot of grungy textures you could use, I'd try and incorporate that more into your design. Maybe add a super light crackling texture to the main container. I'm also a fan of the left alignment you decided to use, instead of a justified, it really works with your look. I really can't think of anything to improve. This is wonderful, and will work great as a mobile design.
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