Project1 premlinary

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Seungwoo Lee
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Project1 premlinary

Post by Seungwoo Lee »

Hello everyone! This is SeungWoo Lee. The influencer I chose is BTS, a Korean boy group. Their songs give me strength in my life in the U.S. This is because I get motivated by Korean influencers through difficult moments when I come to the U.S. from Korea. Among them, BTS is a Korean boy group that is popular all over the world. They release space-themed songs. And they compose and write their own songs. BTS debuted after a long period of training and is rising to the top. Like their efforts, I try to fierce and hard on my life.
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mars_sink
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Post by mars_sink »

Hi SuengWoo,

I like your concepts, but the images and content are disorganized. I would suggest creating some boxes for your information to be placed in so it doesn't feel scattered, and for you to try staying consistent in your font choices throughout the entire website so it has some cohesion. This is a good start though! I have only listened to a couple of BTS songs, so I think this will be a cool site to check out once it's done!
- Mars

Melissa_Sanchez
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Post by Melissa_Sanchez »

Hi Lee,

glad to know you are an army too! BTS has made great music, its good to hear they have given you strength too. Something I would try to work on is the color schemes you have for your website. I think the blue/cyan text might be a bit hard to read against the purple background. I prefer your second design sets. The black text against the purple gradient background gives some nice contrast!

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Emily-Hudson
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Post by Emily-Hudson »

Hi, SeungWoo

I really like your choices of colors for your layouts, especially the purple ones. I think the gradients are very nice and will not take away from the rest of the websites content.

I think you should keep using the blocky sans fonts you are using in your blue layouts. The modern look of it compliments BTS and their aesthetics. I'd like to see a bar or separate object that is below your navigation links, I think that will better separate your layouts and will be easier for a user to not get lost. I would also like to see a way to emphasize your images in your galleries, to make those images pop more.

Great work so far, looking forward to more!
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Olivia_haltom
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Post by Olivia_haltom »

Hello! I loved the look of the purple gradient the most. It really made the text stand out and I think you have some really strong image choices! great job
Olivia Haltom

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PAmes
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Post by PAmes »

Hi SuengWoo!

I love the color choices you made on your second design the blue pops a lot, and I love the darker blue of your fonts. I do think there should be more space between your type and your images, it's very busy and detracts from the design.

Have a great night!
Thanks,
Percy Ames

kevin_ksk
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Post by kevin_ksk »

Hey Seungwoo,



Cool choice of band. You have a lot of colors going on which I like. I don’t know how I feel about the gradient. And I think the biggest thing to work on is adding paragraphs and balancing the imagery with text. It seems image heavy right now
Kevin Kruitbosch 8-)

ngrunwald
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Post by ngrunwald »

Hello, I think the layout with the purple gradient and black text is easier to read than the others. I think that it looks more organized in layout which makes it much easier to find things and navigate through the tabs. Something that could be good would be to make the navigation bar a little bigger so it stands out more.

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Post by Instructor »

Great start Lee, It is always your choice to make the final decision. I am not a fan of the mixing tiel blue color with purple. I do like the potential color combination of curtain behind the image with singers. I am not a fan of Infor If you felt you were keeping with their personalities, perhaps Info
I wonder if you want to spend that much visual real estate on your Nav sections when you use large type for Home, etc. I do like the color scheme of the Purple with purple type on About page.
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genevieve_dierenga
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Post by genevieve_dierenga »

Hey Seungwoo,

I enjoy their music as well. I like the images you used throughout the website. It would be cool to see them larger to have more of a presence in the website. One thing I recommend is trying to find more fonts that can better contrast with the background of your website. great job!

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